This is a good start, making it easy for the reader to understand and follow however there are a couple of grammar errors, 'professional' is spelt wrong and there should be a space in between professional and things. You could improve this by adding more colour to attract the readers attention more.
www. a good guide Shahnaz. You show for p6 that you can use ICT to effectively communicate information. ebi: you now make the changes indicated by Lauren and repost to achieve M2.
This is a good start, making it easy for the reader to understand and follow however there are a couple of grammar errors, 'professional' is spelt wrong and there should be a space in between professional and things. You could improve this by adding more colour to attract the readers attention more.
ReplyDeletewww. a good guide Shahnaz. You show for p6 that you can use ICT to effectively communicate information.
ReplyDeleteebi: you now make the changes indicated by Lauren and repost to achieve M2.